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Wallace Stevens’s “Long and Sluggish Lines”

January 19, 2012 | by

Reading these long and sluggish lines, I can see Wallace Stevens at work in his quiet office, looking out of the window at a cold, sunny winter day much like today. He sees smoke leaving the neighbor’s chimney. Someone has made a fire. But I find the most indelible phrase of this poem to be the “babyishness of forsythia”—as Stevens writes, it’s “a snatch of belief.” It’s the line that helps get me through winter, as I suspect it did Stevens. I’ve never been able to see the wooden branches of a forsythia bush again, bursting into yellow, without thinking of his words.

It makes so little difference, at so much more
Than seventy, where one looks, one has been there before.

Wood-smoke rises through the trees, is caught in an upper flow
Of air and whirled away. But it has been often so.

The trees have a look as if they bore sad names
And kept saying over and over one same, same thing,

In a kind of uproar, because an opposite, a contradiction,
Has enraged them and made them want to talk it down.

What opposite? Could it be that yellow patch, the side
Of a house, that makes one think the house is laughing;

Or these–escent–issant pre-personae: first fly,
A comic infanta among the tragic drapings,

Babyishness of forsythia, a snatch of belief,
The spook and makings of the nude magnolia?

... Wanderer, this is the pre-history of February.
The life of the poem in the mind has not yet begun.

You were not born yet when the trees were crystal
Nor are you now, in this wakefulness inside a sleep.

Eliza Griswold is a poet and reporter. She’ll be speaking tonight at The Poetry Foundation in Chicago.



  1. kadycee | January 19, 2012 at 5:29 pm

    Beautiful. One of my favorite poets.

  2. Veronika | January 19, 2012 at 10:03 pm

    What a beautiful article and poem!

  3. mary lee | January 20, 2012 at 9:00 am

    Very beautiful! Thank you.

  4. M | January 20, 2012 at 10:20 am

    Lovely choice. More from Eliza Griswold, please!!

  5. Anna Mallinson | January 20, 2012 at 1:14 pm

    I love Wallace Stevens and this is wonderful. He is superb!

  6. mardona | January 22, 2012 at 12:54 pm

    You must be a wonderfully young writer to find the “indelible phrase of this poem to be the ‘babyishness of forsythia’—as Stevens writes, it’s ‘a snatch of belief.’”
    when the poem begins:
    “It makes so little difference, at so much more
    Than seventy, where one looks, one has been there before.”
    and Stevens, the aging poet struggles with the pre-history of February
    Stevens was grabbling with a lot more than winter blues.

  7. trakl | January 23, 2012 at 8:29 pm

    it’s the “a lot more than winter blues” that invests the “babyishness” with its real indelibility.

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