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May 18, 2012 | by

How do I improve my prose?

The poet and diplomat Paul Claudel once wrote, “To beware the adjective is the beginning of style.” I ought to have written “the French poet and diplomat” or “the great French poet and diplomat,” because sometimes an adjective is a helpful thing; it is easy to take such advice too much to heart. On the whole, though, Claudel is right: most prose gets better if you take out all the adjectives (and adverbs) that you can.


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15 COMMENTS

15 Comments

  1. M.M. | May 18, 2012 at 4:54 pm

    Isn’t reading the best way to improve one’s writing?

  2. Lorin Stein | May 18, 2012 at 4:56 pm

    In the long run, no doubt!

  3. Chris Roberts | May 18, 2012 at 5:31 pm

    It has to burn white inside of you, the faster you type…no relief…the hotter it gets.

  4. Yasemin Aydinoglu | May 18, 2012 at 5:49 pm

    Reading, too but i think writing is the best way to improve one’s writing.

  5. scott | May 18, 2012 at 6:06 pm

    I would usually agree with removing adjectives and adverbs, but I don’t think its a hard fast rule.

    Can you image cooking without butter?

  6. Lorin Stein | May 18, 2012 at 6:11 pm

    Oh, Scott, I agree! Claudel doesn’t say not to use adjectives; he says to fear them. And he doesn’t say that fearing them is the key to prose, only that it’s a beginning … (Of course, as a Frenchman, he would never have said the same of butter.)

  7. scott | May 18, 2012 at 6:22 pm

    Well, I’m from the Savannah and if Paula Deen as thought me one thing its that butter is our friend !

    Pat Conroy uses a lot of adverbs and adjectives and my favorite, Tennessee Williams said, ” Why would I use 10 words when I can use 20 !”

    I am sure teachers and professors everywhere cringe at the thought of that, but T.W was a fine writer.

  8. Rose Gowen | May 18, 2012 at 7:37 pm

    I think looking for adjectives and adverbs is a good way to improve your writing; you may decide that you want or need them, but at least looking at them critically opens up your sentences again. Then, you can look to see if you have tics– if you rely too much on certain words or phrases or sentence structures. The main thing, I think, is to learn to see your sentences as open and changeable.

  9. Gintas | May 18, 2012 at 8:52 pm

    I think the main thing is to ensure that you are thinking about communicating with the reader and not how complex and beautiful your writing is. Good writing is such that focuses on delivering the message to your reader with the maximum amount of clarity. Sometimes, this involves prose that is laden with adjectives and adverbs but I am of the opinion that often, the reader needs and desires less.

  10. z dylan brennan | May 18, 2012 at 9:30 pm

    Oh the curse of the adjective! What fraudulence!

    You could’ve just combined both of your answers to describe the joy of never using an adjective…

    And please, dear Gintas, never again mention this idea that good writing should focus on “delivering the message to your reader.” That’s like saying buttered popcorn is the best Jelly Belly.

  11. Amar | May 18, 2012 at 10:54 pm

    To quote Beck “you can’t right if you can’t relate”.

  12. greg hoey | May 19, 2012 at 1:14 am

    adjectives and adverbs have their use and misuse.

  13. John B. | May 21, 2012 at 2:57 pm

    To beware the adjective, not beware of.

  14. Lorin Stein | May 21, 2012 at 3:00 pm

    Yes, John B., you’re right! (So my ear tells me.) But why?

  15. Beat Schindler | May 26, 2012 at 7:42 am

    “To beware the adjective is the beginning of style” reminds me of this Mark Twain quote: “Substitute ‘damn’ every time you’re inclined to write ‘very’. Your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.”

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